Sunday, 17 September 2017

My Poem about Lying in bed :)

Poem

As I fall down, warmth wraps around me like a cuddly teddy bear. I feel comfortable and relaxed on a stressful day.

Moving around on the heaven like Mateus I can't find a comfortable position to sleep on. All I feel is my body boiling with hotness.

I feel weak and sleepy when I stand up from a soft and squishy platform of goodness. I feel like a dad that hasn't slept for one whole night from his annoying and crazy kids Matthew and Haveyou.

Tuesday, 15 August 2017

WALT- set the scene

The Dead Woods

The Dead Woods, so creepy I want to wet my pants NOT!. You will see poor and lifeless trees like dead soldiers getting ready to go to heaven. In the gloomy and mystic fog lies 200 year old ghosts getting ready to haunt people's lives forever “dun dun duuuuuuuun”. “Ahhhhh,” when I walk under the deadly trees I feel blood dripping from above. What is it I wonder? Walking through the piles of leaves, I hear the sound of crunching. It brings back memories of how I, Jolui, had beat my big sister Maria at a pringle eating challenge on my birthday. Walking through, I see a bright light shining like a group of people walking around aimlessly with their torchers trying to find, who knows what. As I approach the light coming from the old, rotting house I can see a lonely shoe sitting on the second to last step. Whose shoe is this I wonder? Maybe it belongs to…. Cindalella.

Sunday, 23 July 2017

Speech judging sheet

Speech Judging Sheet


Name: Jolui Petelo                          Topic: People should try out different kinds of foods                     
                   
Category
Main Points

Self Assessment
Low                                         High
1           2           3           4           5
Structure

 
My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.
2
Delivery

 
I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience.

My voice was clear and loud.  I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.
2
Content
 
My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.
3
Language

I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech.  I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)
2
Time

My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.
2


Next time I need to … speak more slower and louder. I also need to use more eye contact with the audience.




Teacher Comment

Thursday, 29 June 2017

WALT- Sharing my speech in class

WALT- writing speeches

Why People should try out different kinds of foods?
Jolui

Don’t you just want to try out different kinds of foods, well my name is Jolui and I’m a friendly, marvellous guy. This very glorious day I'm going to talk about why people (Including kids) should try out different kinds of food. Who wants to listen to a hilarious joke? I bet all of you do. What did Sushi A say to Sushi B? WASA,BI. Get it. Ha ha ha ha!

So the first reason I’m going to talk about is that kids including us should try out different kinds of foods they don’t like or have never tried tasting before such as vegetables because they might be healthier for you and you might just grow a bit and be brave so….just do it. Grace Derocha says takes 20 to 30 times to try a food before you will actually get a taste for it.
Many health surveys, including 5plus a day say by choosing a variety of different foods with different colors and from different food groups, you will have a well-balanced nutritious diet.


The second amazing reason to talk about is You should always be open to trying new things like different countries food like Korean food, Korean food is famous for its hearty spicy stews, bright pickled vegetables, and addictive barbecue. If you haven’t tried Korean food you should because it is healthy and scrumptious, every country around the world have healthy food like my culture Samoa.

My third and final reason is that you should try different foods every day or every week but not junk food because junk food makes you fat like a pig. And you never know, trying new food might make you healthier and strong like me. So remember, always try new food but don’t always eat junk food.

So now it comes to an end, always try new food and remember, don’t eat too much junk food you know what it might do to you, well see ya.